INT · Her flat, bedroom · NIGHT
Cold open
She is already awake when the alarm goes. We never see it ring.
SHOT 1EWS · 24mm
Reference: a single practical, hard shadow across the ceiling. No fill.
SHOT 2MCU · 50mm
Hold on the ceiling long enough that it becomes uncomfortable.
Setup
Lens
Time
A - wide
24mm
0:08
B - single
50mm
0:12
C - insert
100mm
0:04
Editor
Do we need the alarm sound at all? Try the cut without it.
SHOT 3ECU · 100mm
Insert: the clock. Only shot we need on the 100mm.
Shot list
| Shot | Size | Lens | Movement | Dur | Description |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | EWS | 24mm | Static | 8s | The flat, still dark. Street light through the blind. |
| 2 | MCU | 50mm | Slow push | 12s | Her face, eyes open, waiting for the alarm. |
| 3 | ECU | 100mm | Static | 4s | The clock face turning over to 05:59. |